
~
I live
Beyond the mirror
~
I know
There is some
Breathing beauty
Far beyond
The glassy
The wooden
Reflective lens
~
I am
Above the mirror
~
I know
There is some
Floating vision
Surviving
High above
Framed eyes
~
I AM
The mirror
Fluctuating
In smokey moods
And lights
Of all
I want to be
And need to be
~


12 comments:
you are forever finding the cleverest things to write about... i feel like i am learning something every time i come here....
A good reflection of wisdom there.
...Maya...
That is a very cool piece of art! I loved your form and expressions.
An unusual piece of art and an unusual style of poetry! They both work so well together
I love your poem and I love the mirror great post.
thats beautiful! :)
the part" I Am Above the mirror"
it has very strong survivor kinda shades to it! :)
I liked the three levels said here..
Profound, insightful, spiritual -- really loved this. It is wholly original with just a hint of a 'WineDarkSea' feel.
Cool piece Gemma... ;)
Gemma,
A piece from somebody who knows herself fully, seeing herself beyond what the mirror, and what the abvious tells her. This poem of declaration shows the true reflection of your soul. I like what I saw.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
So very different.
I live. I know. I am. I know. I AM.
Love the way you did this.
..mirrors and reflections
invariably remind me of water,perhaps the original mirror.the sequence of 'I live. I know. I am. I know. I AM.'for no reason still pushes me to some muted suggestiveness that the mirror is somehow urging its' subject on towards ablutions..imaginary interpretations perhaps..
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