Pic from Easy Street ~ Prompt #138This is a series of lunes for Poefusion and Easy Street
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flying spinning chairs
circular
colours in the sky
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mechanical wings
up and down
adrenalin rush
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locked caged steel freedom
seasonal
thrill for a moment
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modern beast of fun
for children
ticket to somewhere
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laughter memories
for adults
soul of yesterday
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4 comments:
What a wealth of lunes! I found this form made me wat to use alliteration. I notice you've done this in the first one. I love them all - different takes on the same situation.
i like the way you introduced elements of danger in such lines as
locked caged steel freedom
modern beast of fun
very nicely done....
I love these lune. You've recreated carnival fun here and it made me long for a carnival ride again. Can't wait to go. Are you ready? Wonderful job. Have a nice day.
What a great Lune, the imagery was thrilling and captured a day at the theme park superbly. Thanks for sharing it!
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