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Simply Snickers prompt ~ boot bid blame
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Diamond raindrops on roses
And sharp whiskers on kittens
Bright coloured metals
And warm fluffy mittens
Wild songs that spin with the moon on their wings
These are a few of my night-life things
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Gals in black dresses
With red velvet flashes
Stardust that sings
On my lips and eyelashes
High boots that slink to sensual strings
These are a few of my night-life things
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When some dog bites
When some bee stings
When I'm feeling bad
I simply blame my night-life things
And then I don't feel so mad
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Black suited bankers
And sly politicians
Bid me to slump
Into humble submission
Beauty is bought for a cash-flow fling
These are a few of my night-life things
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But when the dawn breaks
When the day wakes
When I'm feeling sad
I simply remember a promise of spring
And then
I try to feel glad
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4 comments:
Gemma,
Julie would be proud. ;)
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Gemma, this entire piece is amazing! in some way, it depicts a sad, desperation; but it's crazily humorous as well! i haven't been a visitor at your site often but i get a sense of your 'seriousness' and so, this piece is definitely a 'jump' for you! and a great one, i'd say! i like how you used 'my favorite things' as a starting point and wove verses into it...the line 'Beauty is bought for a cash- flow fling'...brilliant!
first off,, "my favorite things" is one of my feel good songs so you know i love the reminiscence this post bears to it.. secondly i am so a fan of old odd shoes,, in fact i have two framed and on the wall of my entrance way...
this was a delight and filled with my favorite things!!!!!
So well done . . . . and I SIMPLY love the artwork!
Thanks for participating at SIMPLY SNICKERS.
Blessings,
Linda
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