Microfiction Monday #46 ~ where a picture paints 140 characters, or even fewer. Susan says:
Photos will be from my own archives; illustrations are from Dover Publications' free clipart sample newsletter.
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He ignored the jumble of buildings at Coolville.
Belpre was his ritual destination every Spring.
Tiny Hannah was his real Spring, always.
(140 characters)
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Monday, August 30, 2010
It's Not Coolville
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17 comments:
Ooo...who is Tiny Hannah and why does he go there every spring? This could the beginning of a fantastic story.
Lovely microfiction! Have an awesome week x
Love is never tiny but sometimes it lasts big. Thanks for dropping by to read my 140. Hope your week goes well
good use of the prompt. i too think you could open this one up into a longer story. have a great day.
yeah tiny little Hanna would make for a good story. Thanks for visiting my place I appreciate your comments and visits.
Larrysee you next week.
Larry
Coolville does sound like a jumble of buildings. Nice Mircofiction!
What an intriguing take on the pic of the day, Gemma! I love it and it could indeed be the beginning of a longer tale! Have a great week!
Sylvia
that's it! you're going to leave us hanging!?
good one
I like this, Gemma! Very original!
Love is in the air me thinks :) I can see why he would give heave ho to Coolville. Well done. Have a great week ahead :)
This sounds like the opening line to a great novel.
This one begs for more!
hmmmm tiny hannah... wonder who she might be?
OH, I want to know more. This raises so many questions in my mind. He sounds like a distant buy loving father. good one.
I love stories which leave me wanting to know what happened afterwards.
My MM is here.
Reel us in, Gemma. We are hooked.
Is Tiny Hannah his daughter, perhaps, that he only gets to see once a year? Or is she a tiny lover, maybe...hmmm. Intriguing...enjoyed your take on the picture. Cheers!
Aww -- lucky lucky Hannah!
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