Pic by Gemma Wiseman ~ On the edge of time
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3WW Prompt XCVIII ~ million + time + unnoticed
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Time WAS when some fragrant idea
Dissolved
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Time IS when a million breaths
Slip by
Unnoticed
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Time WILL BE the mystery of
Some fragrant idea
Trapped in
A million breaths
Silenced
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10 comments:
To know that all creatures have breathed the same air through the millenia, somehow brings us closer to Godlike...connected in time.
Beautiful Gemma...
sharon
Excellent job describing time. Well said.
Very nice. And it would be complete even if you had only the middle stanza.
I like the past, present, and future and how you combined the fragrant idea with the breaths in the future. Lovely!
FInally! I get to view your blog! for some strange reason, it never loads for me
YOur words are so lovely, so sad, glad I kept trying!
A unity with everything that's ever been. I like it!
is it better to think in seconds, minutes, hours, days...or moments? Love your thoughts and can't wait to read more...
That's beautiful Gemma! I've also been having the same issues as 'Lucy' regarding your blog not loading sometimes. Not to worry, I just visit again later :)
This is lovely, Gemma. It gave me a tingle in the spine.
beautiful g, love how you caught time on a wing...
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