Moon
Lonely barrel
Of ethereal light
Buoyed
In a sparkling sea
Of velvet
~Steady beam
Spasmodically sponged
With careless cloud
~Moon
Fragile light
Energy's reflection
Mirrored universeUndulating
Shaped light
~Mothered
Seasonal whim
Fathered
Wreckless Time
~
Moon
Moon
Treasured focus
Lover's dream
Lover's sigh
No real love
~Moon
Cursed
Conquered
~Freedom
Intangible bond
Natural circumstance
~Allocated
Essence of the Earth
In Earthly ways
~Light
Beholden to
Light
~
11 comments:
"Moon
Lonely barrel
Of ethereal light
Buoyed
In a sparkling sea
Of velvet"
- wonderful. My favorite part of the poem.
I like the end best,
"Light
Beholden to
Light"
It flows...
:D
word by word
I rode along with this one and savored each word and image. Lovely!
how captivating
WDS
It's unusual to find something different written about the moon but you did it!
This colors and reflections of this picture is mesmerizing. I can't take my eyes away! It's beauty indeed great to behold. I like the poem too....goes well with the prompt! I enjoyed visiting you and will be back again.
That's really nice!
We certainly attribute a lot of meanings to the Moon, it is out of our World but such a significant part of it, all the same.
I liked the "Cursed, conquered" part :)
beautiful imagery. I love buoyed by a sea of velvet. I can almost feel it.
i agree with steerforth, the first part of your poem is my favorite as well. the picture cements the beauty of your words. but, then again, anyhting that you write is beautiful....i always enjoy losing myself in the beauty of your words.
best,
rebecca
Very poetic, dark and mysterious post about our celestial word - great images too!!!
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