Lost, tossed and crumpled
Hungry eyes litter the street
Wait for light to change
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 17 – February 17th – Theme or Word: Wait + Paint the Image
Inspirational Image Clicked by Anand of: Apple Blossom's Photography
Inspirational Image Clicked by Anand of: Apple Blossom's Photography
11 comments:
Hi Gemma, I always enjoy your haiku from down under :-). This one is ... great. Well done.
Sad but powerful lines....nice one ~
Hungry eyes litter the street...a powerful image...a great haiku!
Astute insight Gemma.
Lovely expression....greatly penned :)
'Lost, tossed and crumpled' poignant image.
Ending up in Hope of the light to change makes it hopeful.
Wonderful!
Visceral reaction to your word imagery, Gemma -- powerfully penned with insight and hope!
And when (not if) that light finally changes, miracles will happen!
Waiting for the Women
Lost, tossed and crumpled is so expressive of sadness. Good job.
Powerful words!
'Lost, tossed and crumpled' and I will be happy to wait for light to change their life..
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