Wandering Dromana beach on a cool summer's day
Just giving some time
Sharing experiences
Connection of souls
Connection of souls
Treasuring the joys and tears
As they walk the beach
As they walk the beach
Love smiles quietly round them
Just giving some time
(ABC, CDE, EFA)
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 23 – February 23rd – Theme: Joy of Giving Form: (ABC, CDE, EFA) - Haiku
15 comments:
yes! Giving time is so important.
The beauty of peaceful connection...love your words and photograph
You did a wonderful job on this haiku form. I wasn't familiar with this form, but I, too, succeeded ... and I loved it.
I like that walk..such a joy to spend time together ~
If I may suggest just a tweak to make the first verse 5-7-5:
Just giving some time
Sharing their experiences
Connection of souls
And that picture is lovely ~
Keep on writing ~
I love this, and the picture is so sweet.
A very nice take on the prompt. Enjoyed reading it.
Nothing like having the blessings of your mother. A delightful read on this prompt.
Beautiful set of haiku!:)
I love the theme "just giving time." It reminds me of what I do with the youth in the detention center. I just give them time to be in a safe space.
Loved it! :)
So beautiful!....Giving some time for our loved ones is really joy of giving
Thanks for sharing :)
A burning candle
Peaceful ...
connection of souls
Thank you for sharing ... Here is my Day 23.
that's so lovely Gemma. The photo is darling!
I like how you brought it back around.
just giving some time ~ Loved your Haiku set Gemma..
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