At last the bars breathe
The cruel scourge is broken
David's star rises
Written for The Haiku Challenge 2012 - Day 27 – February 27th – Theme: Paint the Image
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AUSTRALIA ~ The Antipodes
I love a sunburnt country / A land of sweeping plains / Of ragged mountain ranges / Of droughts and flooding rains / I love her far horizons / I love her jewel-sea / Her beauty and her terror / The wide brown land for me / ~ Dorothea Mackellar (1885-1968)
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Tasmania
A place of beauty in the Western Tiers
Tasmania
View near Blackwood Park Cottages, Mole Creek
New Landscapes
New Worlds
The Inner Light of the Spirit
The Spirit of Inner Light
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16 comments:
Outstanding job with a very tough prompt!
A meaningful take on the prompt...Very nice ~
A meaningful take on the prompt ~
I like the star of David ~
beautiful...
A beautiful haiku...it seems we both had David's star rising
Great gate.
This is a fine, fine piece of work, Gemma. The imagery is vivid and precise.
Paint the Image
Nicely Gemma, love the bit about tje Star of David!
Your blog's still playing havoc with my machine, my diagnostic thingy tells me there's a script continuously running somewhere, I'm using Mozilla Firefox btw.
Gemma, this is a powerful Haiku and beautiful as well. Thank you.
Lovely haiku Gemma. I too used the Star of David in my haiku. It was a tough one this time ... old pain and thoughts overwhelmed me.
I like David's star rises. Very nicely done.
I loved the line "The cruel scourge is broken"
Can sense the feeling of freedom in your haiku.....Beautifully penned
Open gate of your heart
'bars breathe'- lovely personification
and 'The star of David rises'sounds Hopeful and happy ending :)
I like the voice in your Haiku today ... strong and powerful ending. Nicely done! Here is my Day 27.
Very Beautiful..
bars breathe.. Loved your take a lot Gemma..!
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