Pic by Gemma Wiseman ~ Autumn leaves in my Dromana Hills garden, Mornington Peninsula
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Saturday Celebration ~ Try something different and celebrate by stepping outside our comfort zone, and sharing something new!
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Poetry Pantry #44
I am trying triolet!
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When Autumn sings her sad sweet song
When wind-swept colours dance their tunes
I wonder where my joys belong
When Autumn sings her sad sweet song
My summer soul craves to prolong
But latent dreams must cast their runes
When Autumn sings her sad sweet song
When wind-swept colours dance their tunes
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12 comments:
I have just tried writing a triolet as well ... from my viewpoint this is well done! :-)
Photos are great too!
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nice bit of triolet you have there...you must be on the other side of the world thinking autumn, though it is my fav time of year...nicely played...
Autumn - what's that? :)
Here in Finland we're waiting rest of the snow to melt.....
Nice triolet! Love the sound of the alliteration and the connecting of latent and runes adds a layer of great depth.
Sheer perfection..in every iamb a color of autumn and a change in the air. It dances like leaves and sings in the wind. Beautiful.
O.K....now i need to research triolet. You are always teaching me something new. Love the idea that we are just entering spring - barely - and you are in autumn. Love the colors of the leaves in this shot. They are so light and airy looking...no harshness at all. So pretty.
excellent triolet.. but also an exquisite poem..loved your saturday celebration logo too...cheers pete
I really like this form. Your poem and the photo are great!
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Like Brian Miller, I too prefer autumn to any other season in the year. I love the shades of gold, brown, bronze, reds & the cripsness in the air.
Great imagery for the poem. Thanks for sharing.
lovely..
beautiful sentiments.
Gemma,
Very beautiful words, to accompany that lovely image.
I must admit, that here in England, I am enjoying spring and looking forward to summer!
Eileen
I like the form, it is like a song. :)
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