Pic by Gemma Wiseman ~ A clock in a shop window at Mornington
(edited in Picnik)
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Poetry Form Monday ~ Shadorma
My response to
1. Annie Welch's poem - Untitled - draft 2006
2. Dustus' Rainy Day Jersey
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Poetry Pantry #45
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1. The zero
That single second
Contains far
Paradise
When past and future scams burn
Frozen party trick
2. The zero
The scream that is mine
Coffee space
Lacks a soul
My empty drowning highway
My pen to glory
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6 comments:
Your shadorma poem shows the power of seconds and it adds great values to it, lovely write up.
oo i really like zero...it captures well the feelings conveyed...
I really like Zero also, two different shadorma on the same theme Gemma, really great writing
Elegant use of the zero to be less than empty and more than a space filler. Well done on the use of shadorma here. Gay
I liked both of them. Inspiring. Honest. Talent.
Both are good!
aeons
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