Succinctly Yours ~ Week 9
Use the photo as inspiration for a story of 140 characters OR 140 words.
It doesn’t have to be exactly 140, just not more.
Word Of The Week: kink
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You think you lock me in a sweet romance of flowers.
But the kink in your pantomime spell is your stale breath
syruped with slimey words.
(140 characters)
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Monday, May 23, 2011
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10 comments:
very poetic microfiction!
Too funny, Gemma. As Sonia said, poetic!
Hope your arm is healing well.
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So she sees right through him-good girl and nicely done!
"...stale breath
syruped with slimey words."
Wow! I love this description! I didn't know my nose had it in her to conjure up a smell passing throught it, just by reading about one! Lol! My nose: the captive microfiction-audience! Lolouder!
Oooh...she's got his number! Your description is awesome.
She's on to him ;-)
He does appear to be foppish and manipulative, but she sees right through his facade. Excellent!
Lovely, Gemma! Neat and poetic, evocative and humorous. Well done.
Very well done:-)
I love the "syruped with slimey words". I could see this one, even if you hadn't posted the photo.
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