Neonic collage created in Picnik
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Carry on Tuesday #108 ~ This week, we have the first sentence from William Least Heat-Moon’s novel Blue Highways:
Beware thoughts that come in the night
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Poetry Pantry #52~
Doors open to trojans
Dark steeds
Beware thoughts that come in the night
Hosted by Keith's Ramblings
The Poetry Pantry is hosted by Poets United
10 comments:
Amazing art work, and interesting, thought provoking write.
At first your lines made me think of trojan computer viruses! Thoughts that come in my night often lead to poems, so I generally encourage them!
OH this is short sweet and simply brillant just like a master chef!
I like this very much - very descriptive of those night time marauders! Nice writing. :-)
You have characterized night thoughts well.
cute,
you made it with a few words.
well done.
Very efficient with words here
VERY Nice!!
THe art is extraordinary and the poem carries a real punch. I remember as a child being fascinated with the Trojan horse image and terrified. Your poem brought that fear back, and that is how some night thoughts feel. Powerful and well constructed poem.
I love me some Austrailian wit. Your verse could be read a couple of different ways; regardless, I liked them all! Great mind.
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