tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post501938924485565280..comments2024-03-02T20:00:50.737+11:00Comments on Gemma's ~~~ "Greyscale Territory" ~~~~~~~ Poetic Songlines: Beware thoughts...Gemma Wisemanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-14456578876709094362011-06-10T07:51:41.946+10:002011-06-10T07:51:41.946+10:00I love me some Austrailian wit. Your verse could ...I love me some Austrailian wit. Your verse could be read a couple of different ways; regardless, I liked them all! Great mind.Henry Clemmonshttp://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/beware-carry-on-tuesday.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-62827528227453407892011-06-09T17:15:10.320+10:002011-06-09T17:15:10.320+10:00THe art is extraordinary and the poem carries a re...THe art is extraordinary and the poem carries a real punch. I remember as a child being fascinated with the Trojan horse image and terrified. Your poem brought that fear back, and that is how some night thoughts feel. Powerful and well constructed poem.Victoriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13437738911794797906noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-19750050860093528082011-06-08T09:34:53.613+10:002011-06-08T09:34:53.613+10:00VERY Nice!!VERY Nice!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-82583494063602594282011-06-08T02:16:29.570+10:002011-06-08T02:16:29.570+10:00Very efficient with words hereVery efficient with words hereKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-45333124914260917212011-06-07T13:29:23.096+10:002011-06-07T13:29:23.096+10:00cute,
you made it with a few words.
well done.cute,<br /><br />you made it with a few words.<br />well done.Jinglehttp://www.jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-4235746108075307192011-06-06T21:04:38.351+10:002011-06-06T21:04:38.351+10:00You have characterized night thoughts well.You have characterized night thoughts well.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-18588123322049214712011-06-06T19:21:36.989+10:002011-06-06T19:21:36.989+10:00I like this very much - very descriptive of those ...I like this very much - very descriptive of those night time marauders! Nice writing. :-)Susannahhttp://outofmyocean.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-48233065460986798522011-06-06T18:34:35.827+10:002011-06-06T18:34:35.827+10:00OH this is short sweet and simply brillant just li...OH this is short sweet and simply brillant just like a master chef!Whitesnakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681488364720396274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-48403511094528589112011-06-06T16:51:09.671+10:002011-06-06T16:51:09.671+10:00At first your lines made me think of trojan comput...At first your lines made me think of trojan computer viruses! Thoughts that come in my night often lead to poems, so I generally encourage them!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-79884837910003599222011-06-06T11:02:50.616+10:002011-06-06T11:02:50.616+10:00Amazing art work, and interesting, thought provoki...Amazing art work, and interesting, thought provoking write.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.com