tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post7443123529136028966..comments2024-03-02T20:00:50.737+11:00Comments on Gemma's ~~~ "Greyscale Territory" ~~~~~~~ Poetic Songlines: The Wind SingerGemma Wisemanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-6011989612439489952012-07-01T01:47:37.660+10:002012-07-01T01:47:37.660+10:00Gemma, I am always looking for poet-photographers ...Gemma, I am always looking for poet-photographers to feature on Real Toads. If you would be interested in sharing a few images for poetic inspiration, please contact me.<br /><br />theimaginarygarden@gmail.comKerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-37553777601930269852012-06-26T12:31:00.819+10:002012-06-26T12:31:00.819+10:00Oh Gemma I love this romp through an alternate wor...Oh Gemma I love this romp through an alternate world...these lines are so beautiful and mysterious "The strangers' tall tower of<br />Wooden beams and metal pipes<br />Has lost the voice of<br />The soul"Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-3272252924528895032012-06-26T08:21:42.344+10:002012-06-26T08:21:42.344+10:00This is awesome!!! Some very creative and ear-plea...This is awesome!!! Some very creative and ear-pleasing magic in these lines:<br /><br />"And the enigmatic delicacy of mudnuts"<br /><br />"A lonely emperor's passion for chocolate buttons"<br /><br />"And Grey District<br />Orange District<br />Maroon District<br />Dare to mingle<br />Their colours"rosemary minthttp://rosemarymint.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-69623906327173737682012-06-26T01:37:58.317+10:002012-06-26T01:37:58.317+10:00Wow, what a trip! Thank you!
Is it a poetic sho...Wow, what a trip! Thank you! <br />Is it a poetic short cut through the novel? or the way imagination responds to writers who create seamless worlds as if born of whole cloth instead of written? Or . . . ? No matter, your very last line sums beautifully the action even in our own world: <br />"Dare to mingle<br />Their colours"Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-85329651773970864292012-06-26T00:46:26.268+10:002012-06-26T00:46:26.268+10:00I love your mix of the ancient and the modern here...I love your mix of the ancient and the modern here.Kitchen worktops guyhttp://www.madetofit.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-29495414906982616642012-06-25T23:32:55.829+10:002012-06-25T23:32:55.829+10:00I was reading your words before the picture loaded...I was reading your words before the picture loaded and I thought: This sounds like a sumptuous fantasy story, which it is seemingly based on. Your words have done the book credit.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-78423842620476533602012-06-25T23:07:37.624+10:002012-06-25T23:07:37.624+10:00Eureka! Here you are! LOLEureka! Here you are! LOLJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-88656204745344968612012-06-25T22:57:00.640+10:002012-06-25T22:57:00.640+10:00This is interesting, Gemma! We're led by the h...This is interesting, Gemma! We're led by the hand on a journey of beauty, dream and colors! Nice take!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-50690520831442938392012-06-25T19:55:05.939+10:002012-06-25T19:55:05.939+10:00this was magical fairy tale stuff.loved it.this was magical fairy tale stuff.loved it.Abin Chakrabortyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17534639363132246570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-86235397616306052852012-06-25T18:36:30.963+10:002012-06-25T18:36:30.963+10:00So picturesque with all those different elements a...So picturesque with all those different elements amalgamating in search of that lost song.Karishma Shettyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10183133674860648743noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-85704354245151834592012-06-25T00:36:31.900+10:002012-06-25T00:36:31.900+10:00Gemma, this is a spectacular poem. I so love the t...Gemma, this is a spectacular poem. I so love the title......."blow the dust from their bones".....and, especially, the mingling of the colours. WOW!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com