tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post6042033659725995560..comments2024-03-02T20:00:50.737+11:00Comments on Gemma's ~~~ "Greyscale Territory" ~~~~~~~ Poetic Songlines: Haiku Challenge #18 ~ FamineGemma Wisemanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-52750357550792591592012-02-19T07:27:29.755+11:002012-02-19T07:27:29.755+11:00coated in hunger.. Touching way to describe famine...coated in hunger.. Touching way to describe famine..Someone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-29128103124884990952012-02-19T01:59:37.503+11:002012-02-19T01:59:37.503+11:00Ooooh, excellent, Gemma!! Last line the clencher! ...Ooooh, excellent, Gemma!! Last line the clencher! :)becca givenshttp://beccagivens.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-44373794346441453582012-02-18T23:29:49.443+11:002012-02-18T23:29:49.443+11:00The last line--a powerful one--makes me think of s...The last line--a powerful one--makes me think of skin. How can you run away from your own skin? How can you run from hunger?<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/02/18/a-famine-of-ink/" rel="nofollow">A Famine of Ink</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-43790663570860521862012-02-18T19:33:31.645+11:002012-02-18T19:33:31.645+11:00Very true!...Nothing appears in mind rather than h...Very true!...Nothing appears in mind rather than hunger :'(Sri Vallihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04790303641221971643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-58717393037878063572012-02-18T13:38:31.062+11:002012-02-18T13:38:31.062+11:00You have very nicely painted the theme for this ch...You have very nicely painted the theme for this challenge.Asnihttp://awalkinmyheart.wordpress.com/2012/02/18/day-18-famine/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-33642119433189615362012-02-18T13:11:34.680+11:002012-02-18T13:11:34.680+11:00Very strange choice of words 'coated in hunger...Very strange choice of words 'coated in hunger', but maybe I do not understand it very well, because English isn't my maiden language.<br />As I see the other comments ... I think it's something normal to say 'coated in hunger'.<br /><br />Very nice haiku, strong words.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-74354888076184439592012-02-18T13:06:45.806+11:002012-02-18T13:06:45.806+11:00You're right. It is hard to be anything else ...You're right. It is hard to be anything else but locked in hunger when one experiences famine.Cloaked Monk/Terrihttp://www.cloakedmonk.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-64556710990647080072012-02-18T11:49:04.678+11:002012-02-18T11:49:04.678+11:00Great closing line!Great closing line!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-80155700371444178272012-02-18T10:32:46.674+11:002012-02-18T10:32:46.674+11:00I like coated in hunger ~ Nice one ~I like coated in hunger ~ Nice one ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.com