tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post3725752465151051118..comments2024-03-02T20:00:50.737+11:00Comments on Gemma's ~~~ "Greyscale Territory" ~~~~~~~ Poetic Songlines: Yesterday Was WrongGemma Wisemanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-73221000463707985862012-07-18T15:02:27.318+10:002012-07-18T15:02:27.318+10:00Ouch! A very fitting tale, so nicely written!Ouch! A very fitting tale, so nicely written!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-55263778891701883612012-07-18T11:21:07.015+10:002012-07-18T11:21:07.015+10:00wonderful~wonderful~Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-82213072796448519412012-07-17T17:53:31.516+10:002012-07-17T17:53:31.516+10:00A story unfolding...great..and unique....A story unfolding...great..and unique....Sreejahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01395234979504881964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-5532716494386700752012-07-17T06:02:27.847+10:002012-07-17T06:02:27.847+10:00a randy bit of mourning, nice...a randy bit of mourning, nice...robkistnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08166835029205143266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-87707991004766434282012-07-17T06:00:18.643+10:002012-07-17T06:00:18.643+10:00Sharp - cutting, and spot onSharp - cutting, and spot onLittle Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-44905348310845562202012-07-17T04:28:38.900+10:002012-07-17T04:28:38.900+10:00Cool.
Especially this:
There are times when
Rea...Cool.<br /><br />Especially this:<br /><br /><br />There are times when<br />Reason<br />Rocks<br />Protocol<br /><br />and "eye fire."<br /><br />Nice twist, too.<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-40114209861785055772012-07-17T02:41:32.479+10:002012-07-17T02:41:32.479+10:00This poem packs a tremendous punch at the end. Lo...This poem packs a tremendous punch at the end. Love it when I encounter something totally unexpected in a poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-33626073873132196652012-07-17T02:37:16.359+10:002012-07-17T02:37:16.359+10:00I like that she was 'conscious' of slippin...I like that she was 'conscious' of slipping into that black dress ... nice writing.Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-51291136756685201362012-07-16T20:23:31.454+10:002012-07-16T20:23:31.454+10:00That is a real WoW poem for me. What a real cracke...That is a real WoW poem for me. What a real cracker of a phrase you have written with "One <br />Split<br />Shaft of<br />Eye <br />Fire"<br /><br />and a stunning twist in the <br />tail.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-71139959675615739312012-07-16T18:29:24.349+10:002012-07-16T18:29:24.349+10:00'One split shaft of eye fire'......lots of...'One split shaft of eye fire'......lots of passion in that!Rinkly Rimeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07890344869337115307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-91174563267246455402012-07-16T11:33:02.108+10:002012-07-16T11:33:02.108+10:00oh really nice twist at the end...and giving thoug...oh really nice twist at the end...and giving thought to who caused that funeral as well...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-24281407882422231492012-07-16T10:23:45.372+10:002012-07-16T10:23:45.372+10:00Oh a stinger at the end...Oh a stinger at the end...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-91121562954498551992012-07-16T08:40:37.811+10:002012-07-16T08:40:37.811+10:00Excellent piece!Excellent piece!Maude Lynnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03669688074743095866noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-82567511596649206902012-07-16T07:27:45.847+10:002012-07-16T07:27:45.847+10:00What a great interpretation of the image. Tells qu...What a great interpretation of the image. Tells quite a story. The plot would actually work well as a short story.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.com