tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post2516062505735291272..comments2024-03-02T20:00:50.737+11:00Comments on Gemma's ~~~ "Greyscale Territory" ~~~~~~~ Poetic Songlines: Haiku Challenge #16 ~ Sin in HaibunGemma Wisemanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-5233703286375836632012-02-21T16:15:22.726+11:002012-02-21T16:15:22.726+11:00You prompted me to wonder about the house, the own...You prompted me to wonder about the house, the owner, the circumstances of its abandonment. Terrific piece.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-28684665165717362892012-02-21T11:23:29.447+11:002012-02-21T11:23:29.447+11:00I walk past an empty, abandoned house almost daily...I walk past an empty, abandoned house almost daily. It has a beautiful shell, and probably stories to tell, but its spirit is gone. Much like the house you so beautifully describe. I enjoyed reading this.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-48121208436902313712012-02-21T02:59:18.225+11:002012-02-21T02:59:18.225+11:00I lose myself at times and I see a house without l...I lose myself at times and I see a house without laughter or crying and not see a home because of that. Do "I See"?booguloohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12608900652242111334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-63946279567537526782012-02-17T08:06:28.699+11:002012-02-17T08:06:28.699+11:00Gemma, 'There's a house not far from me th...Gemma, 'There's a house not far from me that never breathes, never blink. It simply survives' Touching!Someone is Specialhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16271391140125090742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-71389974539502099382012-02-17T04:39:20.861+11:002012-02-17T04:39:20.861+11:00Excellent, Gemma!!Excellent, Gemma!!becca givenshttp://beccagivens.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-31245013371114394222012-02-17T03:42:20.558+11:002012-02-17T03:42:20.558+11:00This is beautiful! Very nicely portrayed!This is beautiful! Very nicely portrayed!Amberhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01164242830049637610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-79279486873705863872012-02-17T02:19:27.212+11:002012-02-17T02:19:27.212+11:00Sad but beautiful. Brings a lump to my throat.Sad but beautiful. Brings a lump to my throat.Vidya Suryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12911836541019511108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-5593614322233178382012-02-17T00:25:25.244+11:002012-02-17T00:25:25.244+11:00Excellent.
'Somehow there is a sense of a chil...Excellent.<br />'Somehow there is a sense of a child, discarded,'<br />You've beautifully described the Abandoned House,which hopes to greet and farewells....https://www.blogger.com/profile/13816658715293094676noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-66749043881570975552012-02-17T00:06:24.329+11:002012-02-17T00:06:24.329+11:00This is a poignant and well-written piece, Gemma. ...This is a poignant and well-written piece, Gemma. I hope to see more haibun from you, because in haibun you shine!<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/02/15/wedding-day/" rel="nofollow">Wedding Day: Haibun</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-82479060464653035812012-02-16T19:58:24.488+11:002012-02-16T19:58:24.488+11:00Beautiful Haibun...Liked it :)Beautiful Haibun...Liked it :)⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺https://www.blogger.com/profile/02666564014180302696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-888981577270077442012-02-16T04:09:11.382+11:002012-02-16T04:09:11.382+11:00wonderful haibun
It is a fascinating thing how we ...wonderful haibun<br />It is a fascinating thing how we can distill our thoughts<br />capture a moment<br /><br />too bad about that lovely house..so aloneSuzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10329289442910294160noreply@blogger.com