tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post4221548371944031638..comments2024-03-02T20:00:50.737+11:00Comments on Gemma's ~~~ "Greyscale Territory" ~~~~~~~ Poetic Songlines: Pantoum for An Anger PersonaGemma Wisemanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-25775661872079197772010-06-14T05:25:00.964+10:002010-06-14T05:25:00.964+10:00vile vortex indeed!vile vortex indeed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-33822264194292759052010-06-13T00:56:47.264+10:002010-06-13T00:56:47.264+10:00Oh, my. That last stanza felt like it chewed a hol...Oh, my. That last stanza felt like it chewed a hole in my feet!<br /><br />POWERFUL!<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/06/i-cant-be-bad.html" rel="nofollow"> Read my Anger Pantoum here. </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-38258194882722894682010-06-12T16:09:55.686+10:002010-06-12T16:09:55.686+10:00Incredible imagery, powerful. And beautiful.Incredible imagery, powerful. And beautiful.Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14744896385434246402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-64077407029658731862010-06-12T12:02:07.690+10:002010-06-12T12:02:07.690+10:00i'm lovin' these collages you're makin...i'm lovin' these collages you're making from your fire photo and other photographs. can't wait until my photoshop class so i can join in on the fun. hope all is well. have a great weekend.Naquillityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784964201596357136noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-16287011594478984392010-06-12T05:59:49.355+10:002010-06-12T05:59:49.355+10:00A strong poem with strong images. I like "vi...A strong poem with strong images. I like "vile vortex of shameless indifference." You have a beautiful blog. <br /><br /><br /><br />http://troublebeingstrong.blogspot.com/2010/06/when-anger-erupts.htmlDiane Thttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15886778060199433214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-2432899752387340362010-06-12T04:46:05.054+10:002010-06-12T04:46:05.054+10:00wicked, wily, fickle winds - strong and beautiful....wicked, wily, fickle winds - strong and beautiful. Wretched indifference. Provocative read.Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-47389098473074834152010-06-12T01:42:22.442+10:002010-06-12T01:42:22.442+10:00Gemma -- that's very beautiful. I feel too un...Gemma -- that's very beautiful. I feel too untalented to even comment intelligently. But what a beautiful way to find release and thank you for sharing.Sallie (FullTime-Life)https://www.blogger.com/profile/15442598857394838271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-56022483631782187482010-06-11T23:54:40.063+10:002010-06-11T23:54:40.063+10:00"Vile vortex of shameless indifference" ..."Vile vortex of shameless indifference" -- I'd like to use that for a tag line for a product that people could purchase if they want to feel abused. Great line! You've wrapped a great pantoum around that anger, very subtle and elegant (I think anger can be quite elegant, if expressed as in your example). http://lindagoin.com/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00381071407583194092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-78956195787989235782010-06-11T23:44:26.052+10:002010-06-11T23:44:26.052+10:00And you even RHYMED this! Very lovely...And you even RHYMED this! Very lovely...Cynthia Shorthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12386358503730817278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-29292424807513121602010-06-11T23:01:26.046+10:002010-06-11T23:01:26.046+10:00I can feel that anger bubbling. May it always be ...I can feel that anger bubbling. May it always be productive. Nice pantoum.<br /><br />http://inthecornerofmyeye.blogspot.com/2010/06/without-consequenceperson-of-my-bad.htmlMaryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-50774231085223117952010-06-11T22:42:07.831+10:002010-06-11T22:42:07.831+10:00I agree with Stan...brewing and brimming, but not ...I agree with Stan...brewing and brimming, but not screaming at us. Like your use of the form to speak your mind.<br /><br />- DinaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-25152404933140068542010-06-11T19:34:55.371+10:002010-06-11T19:34:55.371+10:00You,ve got it simmering nicely here, don't spo...You,ve got it simmering nicely here, don't spoil things by letting it explode.<br />Great post!Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3467673506431999910.post-67571190210421778562010-06-11T09:45:01.301+10:002010-06-11T09:45:01.301+10:00Interesting poem - it's a villanelle isn't...Interesting poem - it's a villanelle isn't it?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com